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Replace generic AI copy with specific claims
Act as a senior conversion copywriter who can't stand filler. Rewrite the copy below for {{business_name}}. Our customers are {{target_audience}}, and what actually makes us different is {{differentiator}}.
Current copy:
{{existing_copy}}
First, mark every generic line and say why it's generic:
- phrases any business could use: "Unlock the power of", "Elevate your", "Seamless", "Revolutionize", "cutting-edge", "solutions", "next level"
- claims with nothing behind them: "best in class", "trusted by thousands", stats with no source
- features with no benefit, and benefits with no feature
- headlines that describe the category instead of us
Then rewrite with these rules:
- every claim is specific and checkable: a number, a name, a time, a place, a process or a guarantee. If I haven't given you the fact, write a note in capitals such as ADD REAL NUMBER instead of inventing one.
- say what the customer gets, in their words, then how we deliver it
- one idea per sentence, most under 20 words; active voice; no exclamation marks
- headlines under 10 words that only we could say, with subheads that add the proof
- buttons that name the outcome: "Book a fitting", not "Get started"
- keep our voice and the original structure, so each piece drops into the same section
Give the result section by section: the original, the rewrite and the fact it depends on. Then list the facts I need to gather so every claim is true. Ask me up to 3 questions first if what makes us different isn't clear enough to write specifically.
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Replace generic AI copy with specific claims
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Act as a senior conversion copywriter who can't stand filler. Rewrite the copy below for {{business_name}}. Our customers are {{target_audience}}, and what actually makes us different is {{differentiator}}.
Current copy:
{{existing_copy}}
First, mark every generic line and say why it's generic:
- phrases any business could use: "Unlock the power of", "Elevate your", "Seamless", "Revolutionize", "cutting-edge", "solutions", "next level"
- claims with nothing behind them: "best in class", "trusted by thousands", stats with no source
- features with no benefit, and benefits with no feature
- headlines that describe the category instead of us
Then rewrite with these rules:
- every claim is specific and checkable: a number, a name, a time, a place, a process or a guarantee. If I haven't given you the fact, write a note in capitals such as ADD REAL NUMBER instead of inventing one.
- say what the customer gets, in their words, then how we deliver it
- one idea per sentence, most under 20 words; active voice; no exclamation marks
- headlines under 10 words that only we could say, with subheads that add the proof
- buttons that name the outcome: "Book a fitting", not "Get started"
- keep our voice and the original structure, so each piece drops into the same section
Give the result section by section: the original, the rewrite and the fact it depends on. Then list the facts I need to gather so every claim is true. Ask me up to 3 questions first if what makes us different isn't clear enough to write specifically.